That walk in the beach

29 09 2011

we were driving along the beach road in besent nagar.. woha.. it was an amazing evening.. calm and peaceful.. yeah we chose to drive on a government holiday when most people will be indoors watching TV..

splendid it was.. when we parked the car and took a walk inside the beach.. bare foot.. holding hands.. feeling the breeze ruffle through the locks of my hair was an awesome feeling.. and so was the feeling of sand between my toes… we were talking about those times when we were a young couple.. it was in 1960 when we were married.. I was a 17 yr old then… dint know what it took to manage a family… and now? look at me.. I have grand children..

how much ever things have changed around us.. I’m so glad that, still sometimes He treats me like That 17-year-old whom he married years back.. on and on we walked till it became dark… but it was just 7Pm.. we had asked people at home not to expect us before 8.. it is our anniversary today… so we sat by the waters.. and spoke of the green patches of our life together.. how we stood for each other even when we fought over Β the tiniest things…

then he got up.. gave me a hand to get up.. we stood near the water my head resting on his shoulder.. His arm around my waist…and slowly we walked back to the car.. I just dint want the evening to come to an end.. I was hoping with all I ever had that life had a pause button.. so that I could freeze this minute and cherish it for the rest of my life…


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29 09 2011
KC

Nice one seetha πŸ™‚ Good read πŸ™‚ Do you also plan to do something like that?? πŸ˜‰

29 09 2011
SeethaLakshmi Ramachandran

may be πŸ˜‰ after 50 years if bessie beach exists πŸ™‚

29 09 2011
ARJUN MS

Nice one …..after reading I thought the story was a real incident that happened to you!!!!

I too have posted short stories in my blog,please visit and comment on it πŸ™‚

Cheers

29 09 2011
SeethaLakshmi Ramachandran

thanks πŸ™‚ will do πŸ™‚

29 09 2011
urstruelysunnyranthi

nice post. fun to read it

29 09 2011
Rituparna

That was beautiful. That is what I hope for as well. A deep bond that will help me throw life.

29 09 2011
DPB

no one in the world would taste a bitter moment when they have a choice to freeze the happiest moments of their life !!!! lol !

30 09 2011
SeethaLakshmi Ramachandran

yeah thats true πŸ™‚

30 09 2011
Harish S Ram

at one point i thought Tsunami will come & give the pause button the woman asked for πŸ˜€

30 09 2011
SeethaLakshmi Ramachandran

Harish…!!!!

4 10 2011
Shrijeet Roy Choudhary

Good one….
Initially I thought you are talking about your own experience.. and then a young couple in 1960 was a shocker though.. πŸ˜› ..

P.S. Dont know about the beaches in Chennai.. but dont try to walk barefoot in most of the Kerala beaches.. all you will get between your toes is not only sand..but also rubbish and dead jelly fish

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23 06 2012
Muthukumar

Nice one…you always keep twist that’s making more interest to read you stories…:-)

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